Talk:2007 Dodge Dealers 400/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 01:33, 11 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this one as well . Kpgj hpjm 01:33, 11 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hamlin held the first position to Hamlin held the lead .
Remove the words for the lead
Kurt Busch led on which laps and Kenseth passed whom to take the lead ?
Change three practice session to three practice sessions
Change in the qualifier to in qualifying
Weird sentence - Kyle Busch was thirteenth, and recorded the nineteenth fastest lap .
What is meant by staggered his pit stop ?
Change in the center of turn two to in the middle of turn two
The Kyle Petty caution sentence could be reworded for better flow
In the lead it is mentioned Kenseth retook the lead on lap 98 , but in the race section it is written lap 99 . Which one is correct ?
Kurt Busch had worn tyres , did Edwards make a pit stop or Busch did not pit ?
Earnhardt was passed by Biffle and Kurt Busch, so how can Biffle pass him 16 laps later if he was already ahead.
Change McMurray's and Montoya made contact to McMurray and Montoya made contact
Change contacted Raines to made contact with Raines
Remove the words at the inside of the track

Comments[edit]

@MWright96: On-hold for now , once these issues are fixed, I will take a final look . Kpgjhpjm 16:03, 11 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- @Kpgjhpjm: Have taken action on all of the points raised above so far. MWright96 (talk) 18:16, 11 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  - @MWright96: There is one typo fort two stops to for two stops

and you didn't fix the Earnhardt -Biffle issue above . When these are fixed , I will be promoting the article. Kpg jhp jm 01:45, 12 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Kpgjhpjm: Hopefully all of the issues have been dealt with. MWright96 (talk) 06:24, 12 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Mwright96: Yes , promoting Kpg jhp jm 06:55, 12 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]