Talk:2014 United States Grand Prix/GA1

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Reviewer: Bcschneider53 (talk · contribs) 00:24, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll give this a look. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 00:24, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead[edit]

  • Just a general note; this is the United States Grand Prix. Should we use American date formats and English? It seems 2017 New York City ePrix does this.
    • As far as I'm aware, it is the standard to write Formula One articles in British English owing to its European roots. MWright96 (talk) 07:48, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • "leaving the sport with only nine entered teams, the lowest number since the 2005 Monaco Grand Prix." Didn't the 2005 USGP have only three? Or is this referring to the number of teams who ran throughout the weekend?
    • Actually, ten were entered for that race and three started. MWright96 (talk) 07:48, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Background[edit]

  • "Drivers have agreed it is a worthwhile system that, however, requires refinement for further testing at subsequent Grands Prix before introduction in 2015." Should the tense be updated here? 2015 has already happened.
  • "Force India team principal Bob Fernley said discussions about a boycott but it would only be performed as a final recourse." This sentence feels like its missing a couple of words after 'boycott'.

Practice and qualifying[edit]

  • "Pérez used two set of soft tyres in the first session to ensure he made the second part of qualifying and took 11th." -> two sets

Race[edit]

  • "Every driver, except for Vettel, Kvyat and Hülkenberg, started on soft compound tyres." Which compound did they start on then?
  • "Bottas gained momentum to pass Ricciarddo around the outside for fourth place." Extraneous d.
  • "Kvyat made an error, allowing Räikkönen to pass him." I think some additional context could be helpful here.

That's all from me, really just a few prose issues. Well done, as usual. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 01:28, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Bcschneider53: Thanks for the review. I have made the adjustments and see the replies to the first two points you raised. MWright96 (talk) 07:48, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@MWright96: Well done. Pass. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 19:32, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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