Talk:2021 24 Hours of Le Mans/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 14:53, 27 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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Rather than ;2021 Hypercar World Endurance Drivers' Championship<ref name="FIAStandings" />, can we use table headers? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:00, 27 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Done MWright96 (talk) 08:29, 2 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Do we need to bold the first instance of a team in the table? Seems a bit pointless. Is there a reason? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:00, 27 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- It is to indicate that a team qualified on pole position in their class and won the race in said category in the race classification table MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 27 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Why are we using images for the tyres? We could easily use letters or symbols. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:00, 27 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm not so sure that will improve things there MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 27 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Any reason why we are just using flagicon to show nationalities, ratehr than flagathlete? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:00, 27 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Standard for endurance motor racing report articles such as this one MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 27 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Have we got no images of the track? WOuld be good for background. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:00, 27 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Added in the background section MWright96 (talk) 08:25, 2 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Review meta comments[edit]

I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:53, 27 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Everything else looks fine to me. Promoting. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:45, 2 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]