Talk:37th Battalion (New Zealand)/GA1

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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 04:04, 11 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]


Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 04:04, 11 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • Lead and infobox
    • Some content about the honours in the lead
    • 1941–45 is to be 1941–1945, per MOS:DATERANGE
    • Wikipedia doesn't have an article on Sudgen, so he isn't notable, but the only commander. Reword
      • Deleted Sudgen from infobox, the note (on first mention of Sudgen) states he was only commander of the battalion. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Section 1;
    • A.H.L. Sugden -> A. H. L. Sugden, per WP:NAMES
      • Wow, you really do know the MOS! Done. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
    • machine-gun; drop -
    • basic context on President Coolidge, type and country
    • the ship captured -> the ship was captured
    • USS Rotanin; to maitain consistency just Rotanin, mention the basic context
  • Section 2;
    • 1942–44 -> 1942–1944
      • I haven't done this one; it is a direct quote from the honours page so I don't think it needs to comply with the MOS. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • 16.5% confidence, violation unlikely
Excellent article, good work Zawed. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 10:45, 14 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Krishna, thanks for the review, have made edits and comments as appropriate. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 03:45, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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