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This article seems to contain a lot of information about the ways in which plays in general are written, and certainly does not confirm to the format I have seen for any other enteries on plays. There is massive amounts of original research albiet not very deep. I feel this is article could benefit from some major cuts such the removal of all analysis of the play not quoted from a reputable source.—Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.158.147.28 (talk) 23:25, 17 June 2010

I agree that there is a lot of information here. I think that some of it can be either combined or deleted because it repeats itself. While the detail is really neat, for a Wiki article (WP:PLOTSUM) a scene by scene description is unneeded. I'm going to work on making some editing to post in the near future to try and condense the plot and character sections. AmyHarbourne (talk) 16:56, 4 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Does Amy die in the third or fourth act? In the synopsis, Act three ends with a conversation between Esme and Amy, and Act four begins with Dominic going to chat with Esme. In the Overview, Act three ends with the same conversation, but the beginning of act four mentioned Amy has died, past tense—so did this occur between the third and fourth act? I'd like to add some specificity to that bit of the Overview section if anyone can help answer.AmyHarbourne (talk) 19:52, 4 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment[edit]

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Citation Question[edit]

In the endnotes, there are two citation errors and I can't figure out how to fix them; I've tried reading up the WP:FOOTNOTES and H:CERNT but I still cannot quite get it right. Does anyone know how to help? AmyHarbourne (talk) 22:54, 11 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Original Research problems[edit]

I've just deleted two "analysis" sections that were clear WP:OR. The Style section could probably be deleted that way as well but there might be recoverable things there. I think the article needs one more scrub for OR so I'm going to tag it. Etherfire (talk) 19:53, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]