Talk:Australia 31–0 American Samoa/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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The article looks very nice. However, some minor problems need to be fixed before I can pass this.—Chris! ct 22:13, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
- The lead is a bit short. I understand that this is a short article, but I believe it is possible to expand it
- I don't like the opening sentence very much. It sounds better imo if written like this: "On XX XX, XXXX, Australia defeated American Samoa 31–0 ..."
- And per WP:BOLDTITLE, descriptive title does not need to be bolded
- Show FIFA's full name in its first use (show this in English, not French)
I have decided to get in on this nomination and have answered all your points. Can I additionally be credited alongside the original author if this is passed? 03md 23:51, 2 September 2009 (UTC)