Talk:Baila Esta Cumbia/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 00:13, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• Please include a detailed description in the "Alt" parameter

•  Done

• This is purely stylistic preference, but instead of using commas in the parameters' spaces, you could use a flatlist

•  Done

Lead

Paragraph 1

• Please put the English translation in quotation marks as such: (English: "Dance to this Cumbia")

•  Done

• "It was released as the second single by EMI Latin, behind "Ya Ves"." --> "It was released as the second single by EMI Latin on August 28, 1990, behind "Ya Ves".'

•  Done

Paragraph 2

• "The track received exposure on radio stations predominately played cumbia music, and as a result the recording became a hit single for the singer." --> "The track received exposure on radio stations that predominately played cumbia music, and as a result the recording became a hit single for the singer."

•  Done

• "It was named among her best recordings in her career by musicologist." What musicologist?

•  Done

Background and release

Paragraph 1

• Remove the comma after "United States" please. (You only put a comma before "and" if what follows the "and" can be a complete thought or sentence on its own, and in this case it doesn't work.)

•  Done

• Please put an apostrophe after "Selena y Los Dinos"

•  Done

• Rest is good! :)

•  Done

Reception and impact

Paragraph 1

• You could include a lead–in/topic sentence for this section stating whether or not the single received positive or negative reviews from music critics!

•  Done

• Rest is fantastic!

•  Done

Cover versions

• "Mexican singer Yuridia performed "Baila Esta Cumbia" during her tour in Mexico in 2013 to a positive reception.[12]" --> Reference #12 doesn't state any of this.

•  Done

Charts

• "Chart (2012/2013/2014))" --> "Chart (2012–14)"

•  Done

End of GA Review:

Just some minor fixes, nothing major. Great work and @PING me here with any questions, comments, or concerns. Thank you and good luck! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 02:27, 21 June 2016 (UTC).

@Carbrera: I have fixed all issues you have raised during your review. – jona ✉ 14:37, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

Great! Thanks for your quick responses. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 17:12, 21 June 2016 (UTC)