Talk:Beat of My Heart/GA1
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Reviewer: Tomica (talk · contribs) 22:43, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
- Infobox
- Lead
- since its inception. ---> I find this kind of vague, why it's just can't be release? — Tomíca(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
- Development
- MTV News should not be italicized — Tomíca(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
- The song was
finallymastered by Joe Gastwirt. — Tomíca(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
- Composition
- It carries ---> How about it contains? — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- An "overcompensating" guitar strums at a "feverish pace" throughout the song. ---> Maybe merge it with the previous sentence, because it's kind of odd on itself. — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- Euro pop ---> europop. — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- In the chorus, she says ---> she sings i guess? — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- she speaks ---> Again sings or some synonym. — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- Critical response
- Suggestion: maybe have Reception as main section and critical and commercial as subsections? — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- Rest looks good. — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- Commercial performance
- Music video
- Live performances
- Formats and track listings
- Credits and personnel
- There's WP:OVERLINK, unlink please. — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- Charts
- References
- Ref. 13. misses publisher — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- Ref. 16. doesn't have accessdate — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- Refs. 17, 18, 19, same, missing accessdate — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- Ref. 23. some linking please. — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- Ref. 25. MTV ---> MTV News. — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- Ref. 26. wrong formatting. — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- Ref. 28. misses publisher. — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
- When you link ref 23, unlink 34 — Tomíca(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)