Talk:Blackburn Buccaneer/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 08:23, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:23, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
- Images appropriately licensed
- Link carrier, interdictor in lede
- Specify that the Sverdlov's were light cruisers
- Check for redundant links within the same section
- Mention that BLC was also used for the horizontal stabilizer and amend the caption in that section accordingly
- Link tailplane, AN-12
- Many of your captions should not have periods (full stops) as they're not complete sentences. See MOS:CAPTION
- Be consistent about using the HMS prefix.
- only 1 aircraft got an aircraft kill through the whole service. The kill was in the Gulf War against a taxiing AN-12 with bombs. The first part is awkward, and I suggest that you merge the second sentence into the first. The kill tally is contradicted later. Which is correct?
- Explain a little bit more about the spar rings, like location and maybe change the link to aircraft spar. Suggest adding a bit more about the wing spars in the structure section, with links and an explanation how it had to go around the engines
- Explain that 216 Sqdn had barely received its aircraft before it was disbanded in the main body
- Nicely done--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:27, 23 June 2023 (UTC)