Talk:Boyfriend (Justin Bieber song)

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DateProcessResult
June 24, 2012Good article nomineeListed

Single Cover[edit]

The cover winner for the single

http://www.batangastoday.com/justin-bieber-boyfriend-cover-art-winner-revealed-special-walmart-single-package-for-fans-photo/21301/ (76.23.79.50 (talk) 11:58, 21 March 2012 (UTC))[reply]

Orphaned references in Boyfriend (Justin Bieber song)[edit]

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Boyfriend (Justin Bieber song)'s orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "Vena":

  • From Justin Bieber: Never Say Never: Vena, Jocelyn (2010-08-19). "Justin Bieber 3-D Movie Is 'A Story For Our Time,' Director Says". MTV News. MTV Networks (Viacom). Retrieved 2011-02-12.
  • From Justin Bieber: Vena, Jocleyn; Kos, Saimon (September 12, 2009). "Usher And Justin Timberlake Battled It Out For Justin Bieber". MTV. Retrieved 2011-01-11.
  • From Never Say Never: The Remixes: "Justin Bieber Working On New Music With Rascal Flatts". MTV News. MTV Networks (Viacom). 2010-12-20. Retrieved 2011-01-31.
  • From My World (EP): Vena, Jocleyn (2009-09-13). "Justin Bieber's Debut Album Isn't Just About Teen Love". MTV. Retrieved 2009-09-13.
  • From Next 2 You (Chris Brown song): Vena, Jocelyn (2011-03-23). "Chris Brown Recalls Making Justin Bieber 'Kind Of Mad'". MTV News. MTV Networks (Viacom). Retrieved 2011-04-17. {{cite web}}: Italic or bold markup not allowed in: |work= (help)
  • From That Should Be Me: Vena, Jocelyn (2010-12-20). "Justin Bieber Working On New Music With Rascal Flatts". MTV News. MTV Networks (Viacom). Retrieved 2011-03-19. {{cite web}}: Italic or bold markup not allowed in: |work= (help)

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT⚡ 15:12, 26 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Anon user: sorry i dont have an account, but this article seems a bit...I mean it has almost the same length as articles on songs like stairway to heaven etc.. just seems strange! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 188.28.11.166 (talk) 23:23, 13 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 04:42, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:


Infobox[edit]

  • Format the "Recorded" section by putting semicolon after year it was recorded, followed by recording studio, and its location (Ex: 2011; Chalice Recording Studios (Hollywood, Los Angeles)
  • "London, England" should not be there unless another studio was mentioned where Bieber recorded the song
  • The lead section mentions Bieber co-writing this song, but he is not credited in the "Writers" section

Lead[edit]

  • "Boyfriend" is a song by Canadian artist Justin Bieber, released as the first single from his third studio album, Believe (2012). → The phrase "studio album" should not be wiki-linked
  • As part of promotion for the song, Bieber performed "Boyfriend" at the final second season of The Voice, and the 2012 Billboard Music Awards. → Change "final second season" to "second season finale"; Add "at" between "and" and "the"

Background and artwork[edit]

  • No issues

Composition[edit]

Critical reception[edit]

  • No issues

Chart performance[edit]

  • The song debuted at number 2 on the chart, only being held off the top spot by "We Are Young" by Fun. and Danielle Monáe. → Change "2" to "two" since it is less than ten; Wiki-link "We Are Young","Fun", and "Danielle Monáe"

Music video[edit]

  • No issues

Live performances[edit]

  • As part of promotion for the song, Bieber performed "Boyfriend" at the final second season of The Voice... → Change "final second season" to "second season finale"

Remixes[edit]

  • No issues

Track listings[edit]

  • No issues

Credits and personnel[edit]

  • No issues

Release history[edit]

  • No issues

References[edit]

  • No issues


After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not concern good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 05:24, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Everything  Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:35, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
So... What are we waiting for? - Saulo Talk to Me 15:13, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry for the late response; I didn't realize you were done addressing all of the issues. Since they have all been addressed, I feel comfortable putting this article into good article status. Keep up the good work! Rp0211 (talk2me) 22:40, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Some comments[edit]

Lead[edit]

  • "released as the first single" --> lead single
  • "The cover art was released" --> How can a cover art be released? You mean revealed?
  • and number two in The United Kingdom" --> 'the' should not have a capital T
  • "The song is the second-highest-ever debut digital sales week in the United States, and has also charted at number 10 on the Pop Songs component chart." --> Don't go well in one sentence
  • music video --> music video
  • "the video broke the VEVO record" --> WHAT record? Should be stated earlier in the sentence

This is from the lead alone. I'll be making more comments soon for improvements. Till 12:37, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:35, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Chart performance[edit]

  • This section is nowhere near as long as it should be. You have to write about all the countries it charted in, as in here.
  • "We Are Young" by Fun. featuring Janelle Monáe" --> Song and artists should be wikilinked Oops! Mentioned above.
    Working on it. - Saulo Talk to Me 17:35, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
     Done - Saulo Talk to Me 19:52, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

References[edit]

  • You need to change every reference that is in capital letters to normal, for example ref. 9 and beyond.
  • Refs. 8 and 34 are from Idolator and Buzz Media, both linked twice, so unlink 34.
  • Ref 51 --> Work and publisher are: iTunes Store. Apple
  • Inconsistency with January 1, 2000 and 2000-01-01. Choose one or the other.
  • Ref. 30 is missing the author (if retrieve-able), work and publisher.
     Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:35, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Till 12:49, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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