Talk:Bronchial thermoplasty

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The text says "heats the lining of the lungs" but shouldn't it say heats the lining of the bronchial tubes? The lining of the lungs could be on the outside, right? 68.183.36.34 (talk) 03:23, 10 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Reference #5 has become a dead link. Its title is currently "An Error Occurred Setting Your User Cookie". The link redirects to the home page of the American Journal of Respiratory and Critical Care Medicine.2602:306:8071:5920:647A:855D:4454:9696 (talk) 01:43, 26 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This page reads like advertising for Alair Systems. It sounds like it was written by someone who works for the company. It could be rewritten in a neutral tone. Alternatively, should it just be deleted? It refers to a specific technology owned by one company and not used that widely. Does this topic even deserve an entire WP article? Onefireuser (talk) 19:00, 31 January 2014 (UTC)Onefireuser[reply]

It looks like the technique is specifically mentioned in Duke's interventional pulmonology fellowship info page, so I think it is significant. Is there a page or section of interventional pulmonology where this could fit better? https://medicine.duke.edu/divisions/pulmonary-allergy-and-critical-care-medicine/about/division-programs/interventional 2601:19B:702:7B50:78DC:359B:7A9D:54C1 (talk) 06:18, 24 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]