Talk:CMLL Arena Coliseo Tag Team Championship/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:11, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will have a look. MWright96 (talk) 18:11, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

(Campeonato Arena Coliseo de Parejas CMLL in Spanish) - rewrite as (Spanish: Campeonato Arena Coliseo de Parejas CMLL)
Mexico City, Mexico should be simply Mexico City
"and the Panther" - Captalise the beginning of the word "the"
"The current champions are the team of Guerrero Maya Jr. and the Panther who won the championship on December 19, 2015 when they defeated La Comando Caribeño ("The Caribbean Commando"; Misterioso Jr. and Sagrado) to become the sixth championship team since Arena Coliseo championship was brought back in 2000." - since the Arena Coliseo championsip was revived in 2000

"The Championship was brought back in 2000," - The championship was revived in 2000
"(Sometimes billed as "Motorcross")" - Sometimes shouldn't be captialised
" La Comando Caribeño ("The Caribbean Commando"; Misterioso Jr. and Sagrado) became the fifth modern day Arena Coliseo Tag Team Championship on February 28, 2015." -Champions

"Win the victory" - With
"1,708 days although there were extended periods of time where the championship was not defended at all." - change to 1,708 days although there were extended periods of time where the championship went undefended

"and has not allowed neither individual wrestlers to hold the championship by themselves nor teams of three to share the championship" - a period is need at the end of this sentence.
Tokyo, Japan should be shortened to just Tokyo

"CMLL held a 16 team tournament in 2008, the top half of the bracket took place on June 15, the bottom half on June 19 and the finals took place on June 29, 2008." - 16-team is missing an hyphen and the comma after 2008 should be replaced by a colon

Those are the issues I found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 21:08, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: - thank you for your review, I definitly appreciate it. I believe I have addressed all the issues. MPJ-DK 21:22, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- @MPJ-DK: Good work. Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 04:56, 18 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]