Talk:Canon de 130 mm Modèle 1924

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Assessment[edit]

  • B1. It is suitably referenced, and all major points have appropriate inline citations. Fails, but just For it's length, it is appropriately sourced, however addition of more would help achieve other criteria
  • B2. It reasonably covers the topic, and does not contain obvious omissions or inaccuracies. Fails If it says "used on a number of French destroyers", surely you can find more. Also, it's very short and some of the technical terms could be shortly explained to help readers.
  • B3. It has a defined structure, including a lead section and one or more sections of content.  Passes
  • B4. It is free from major grammatical errors.  Passes
  • B5. It contains appropriate supporting materials, such as an infobox, images, or diagrams. Fails. There's none - a picture of the gun (and possibly it's ammunition) would be a useful first step <br

So that's start class. 69.165.196.103 (talk) 16:30, 2 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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