Talk:Childbirth in Benin

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I disagree that this article is written like a personal reflection or essay rather than an encyclopedic description of the subject. The author has clearly documented her sources which are either government-sponsored or from peer-reviewed journals. Can you please give examples of which sections read like a personal reflection and/or examples of how to "fix" this article so that it reads more like an encyclopedia? Thanks! Jlewis9591 (talk) 21:39, 23 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]