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A fact from Chinatown, Phoenix appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 25 April 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that most of the Chinese in the Chinatown of Phoenix, Arizona, had emigrated from the same village in China's Hoping County?

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Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 01:25, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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... that most of the Chinese in Phoenix, Arizona's Chinatown had emigrated from the same village in Hoping County in Guangdong Province, China? Source: Minorities in Phoenix, P. 93. "Most of them came from the same village in the district of Hoiping in the province of Guangdong.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Castle Hill (Buda)

Created by MB (talk). Self-nominated at 04:20, 12 April 2022 (UTC).[reply]

The article checks the boxes of length, neutrality, expansion, image copyright, and the hook has adequate citation in the form of a book. With QPQ done, I see no issue here: Y Trillfendi (talk) 21:49, 14 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hook mods[edit]

Theleekycauldron, I don't like the change to "Chinatown, Phoenix". That is completely unnatural and is WP's way of disambiguating since there are many Chinatowns. No one ever called it Chinatown, Phoenix. Can we put this back to Phoenix's Chinatown? The change to the end of the hook is an improvement - eliminating an "in". MB 01:20, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@MB: I agree, it's a little awkward; I was trying to fix the MOS:GEOCOMMA problem with "Phoenix, Arizona's". Is there no issue there/can you help me out on that? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 01:22, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Theleekycauldron, I think it was correct. The apostrophe is "other punctuation". MB 01:57, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Theleekycauldron, I put that part of the hook back as it was. This wasn't intended to be quirky, but I saw we are low on quirky hooks. We could scrap this hook and go more quirky (but that would require reopening the nom and adding cites in the article) with:

... that the "mayor" of Phoenix, Arizona's Chinatown was China Dick? MB 03:24, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@MB: restoration is fine by me; the new hook wouldn't require re-opening the nom, but ehhh. quirkiness ≠ dirty humour. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 08:44, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
i moved "Phoenix, Arizona's" inside the link, though; it's a little WP:EGGy to just link Chinatown, because then people think it's about Chinatown. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 08:45, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]