Talk:Ciutat Morta/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:20, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:20, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review so far, the article is improved for it. I've answered everything with some queries, see what you think. Mujinga (talk) 11:51, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
- re "expanding #Production to meet the third criteria" I added some lines yesterday and I've added some more today from the last review I found. I've also put in the academic analysis that was previously in further reading. I don't think this film will ever have a production section the size of say Blade Runner 2049, I'm happy the main aspects are covered. Back to you, thanks! Mujinga (talk) 11:38, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review so far, the article is improved for it. I've answered everything with some queries, see what you think. Mujinga (talk) 11:51, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead[edit]
- Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.
- "Poster" → "Promotional release poster"
- Don't use "<br />" in the infobox. Use "plainlist" instead.
- In the lead, remove the comma after "until 2015".
- I've read it a few times, I prefer it with the comma. Could rephrase if it's a big issue. Might be a British English / US English thing? Mujinga (talk) 10:02, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
- The issue was that the sentence is kinda short, so a comma wasn't necessary.
Plot[edit]
- This section is over 400 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
- Remove the comma after "hit on the head".
- Add a comma after the first naming of Rodrigo Lanza.
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- I see your point; it was an Oxford comma thing.
- Remove the comma after "Alfredo Pestana".
- Add a comma after "they looked".
- "son of diplomat" → "son of a diplomat"
Themes[edit]
- Add a comma after "gentrification".
- don't see the need for it, we must have different comma styles Mujinga (talk) 10:10, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
- Yeah, it was another Oxford comma thing.
- Other than that, this section looks good.
Production[edit]
- "seven-storey" → "seven-story"
- Add a comma after "Guàrdia Urbana".
- "decide" → "decided"
- This section is extremely short, so try expanding it.
Release[edit]
- Add a comma after "June 8, 2013".
- "action" → "act"
- "department" → "Department"
Critical response[edit]
- The word "onesidedness" doesn't sound right, so maybe reword it?
- Add more reviews (if possible).
Legacy[edit]
- Remove the comma after "Guàrdia Urbana".
- Add a comma after "Cs, PP".
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