Talk:Clark Thomas Rogerson
Clark Thomas Rogerson has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: November 19, 2013. (Reviewed version). |
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Clark Thomas Rogerson/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth (talk · contribs) 06:39, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
- I propose to take on this review. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:39, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
First reading[edit]
- My first impression is of a well-written, competent article. I have made a few points below but really there is little to criticize.
- Where two citations cover a paragraph, they are sometimes in reverse numerical order.
- "... he became a curator at The New York Botanical Garden, and served as editor for various Garden publications." - I would object to the capitalisation of the word "The" but I see that it this usage appears elsewhere.
- In the same sentence "Garden" is capitalised, but nevertheless on my first reading of the lead I thought that he was editing books about gardening. Perhaps his role could be made clearer.
- Changed to "and served as editor for various academic journals published by the Garden."
- I see the image has a fair use rationale. I have heard of this but have not actually come across it before.
- "... but settled instead for the only available studentship with plant pathologist B.L. Richards." - It would be nice to include Richards' full name.
- "He was Vice-President, President Elect, President of the Mycological Society of America in 1967, 1968, and 1969, respectively, and secretary-treasurer ..." - This sentence is a bit awkward. Perhaps it could be split.
- "Rogerson died in Ogden September 7, 2001." - punctuation.
- "fungicolous" - what does this word mean?
- I've added a wiktionary link until the article on Fungicolous fungi is created. Sasata (talk) 17:03, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
- The "Mycological lineage" section seems a bit odd and off topic, but I daresay such a section is justified.
- Be consistent with use of names. The "Mycological lineage" paragraph uses names with various formats.
- "Rogerson received several awards and honors throughout his career:"- perhaps "during"
- "1989: A special volume celebrating the 70th birthday of C.T. Rogerson" - A special volume of what?
- Changed to "commemorative publication". Sasata (talk) 17:03, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
- Where does your list of publications come from?
- That's all for now. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:36, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
Hope you don't mind me dropping by; perhaps the article should be categorised based on the institutions at which he worked? J Milburn (talk) 17:24, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
GA Criteria[edit]
- 1a The article is well written
- 1b The article conforms with the MOS guidelines as to style and layout.
- 2a&b The article is well referenced and has inline citations for all contentious statements.
- 2c There is no original research that I can see.
- 3a&b The coverage is broad enough and the article does not include irrelevant material.
- 4 The article is neutral.
- 5 The article was expanded by the nominator in early October 2013 and has hardly been edited by anybody else since.
- 6 The main image has a fair use rationale. It is a low resolution image and is used as a visual identification for the subject of this biographical article.
- 7 The two images are both relevant to the topic and have suitable captions.
- Overall assessment - Pass.
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