Talk:Desejos de Mulher

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Poor translation[edit]

I suspect this plot summary was translated from Spanish to English using something like Google Translate. To an English speaker, it doesn't make much sense. For example, the first sentence uses the phrase "Júlia Moreno, who is not legitimate daughter of Attilio and Mercedes." I'm assuming it should be "who is not a legitimate daughter." There's also sentences that are written in third person, like "the two plan to get hold of all your assets." This desperately needs to be rewritten, but since I'm not familiar with the original series, I don't know what a correct description would be. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zikzak23 (talkcontribs) 01:54, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]