Talk:Dimension Data

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Promotional tone[edit]

This article reads like internal PR and not like an encyclopaedic entry whatsoever!

"Our rich history in networking has placed us at the forefront in helping clients simplify and consolidate their IT infrastructures through Internet Protocol (IP) convergence"

Anyone fancy a go at making this sound like a real article? --Mattsday (talk) 16:18, 26 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Blatant spam[edit]

This sounds like either a copy pasta, or an attempt by Dimension PR to put up a wiki page Matgraham (talk) 06:58, 9 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Still needs to be fixed. Also propose merging with subsidiary articles until we have enough material that would satisfy a notability challenge (independent sources). W Nowicki (talk) 22:43, 27 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I worked on this page for a while offline and just updated here to try to remove promotional sounding copy. I also added products and services in a way that simply stated what they were not in a way that sounds promotional or advertorial. I have no opinion about the merge of the other pages (the subsidiaries), but I included more information about them in the subsidiaries section - I changed to acquisitions and subsidiaries - in case the merge happens. That will make less work for those who move the information if that is what winds up happening. --Lernergates (talk) 08:42, 25 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]