Talk:Eliot Lipp

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Need to lose the fanzine style[edit]

In particular, get rid of the ominiscient psycho-narration (e.g. "... he knew...", "...he felt...", "...anxious..." etc.) & all the rest of the bogus bio-twaddle. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.68.112.16 (talk) 21:35, 13 July 2008 (UTC) wut abowt peace luv weed 3d —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.49.171.243 (talk) 04:22, 25 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Some additional changes have been made and now it sounds even more "fanzine style". In particular, we need to do some work on the music career section. --TravisBernard (talk) 19:45, 22 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Tour Section Should Be Deleted[edit]

Does anyone have a problem with deleting this section? It is outdated, and other artist pages do not include such sections. See this featured article on Radiohead as a reference. --TravisBernard (talk) 18:44, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I went ahead and made this change. --TravisBernard (talk) 00:07, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Beginnings[edit]

This entire section should be deleted. The sources are his website, and it is not written in a neutral tone. --TravisBernard (talk) 15:35, 25 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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