Talk:Fire Emblem: Genealogy of the Holy War/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: IDV (talk · contribs) 23:21, 19 November 2016 (UTC)

I'll be back with a review soon, at latest on Monday but probably before that.--IDV^talk 23:21, 19 November 2016 (UTC)

Overall

• At several points, such as The story is told over two generations - the first, you use - when you should be using – or —, or even : or ;

Gameplay

• Image captions are meant to be concise - you can cut the game's title here, as it's obvious from context what game we're talking about
• Experience points are never mentioned again, so I wonder if it's really necessary to introduce the acronym EXP

Synopsis

• between eight countries: Kingdom of Grannvale We probably need a "the" here
• By 632, the Divine Dragon Naga had discovered Loptyr's part in the gradual conquest of Judgral, she chose twelve I think a word is missing here. Maybe "so she chose" or something similar?

Reception

• As of 2002, the game had told Sold
• the many lasting featured Features

Comments

• @ProtoDrake: Nice work. There are some minor issues; after they have been addressed, I believe this is ready to be promoted to GA.--IDV^talk 01:06, 21 November 2016 (UTC)

@IDV: I've done my best to address all the issues above. --ProtoDrake (talk) 09:23, 21 November 2016 (UTC)

@ProtoDrake: Thank you very much, I'll promote it to GA now.--IDV^talk 11:12, 21 November 2016 (UTC)