Talk:Flavor (Iyanya song)

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:22, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will start this soon. JAGUAR 14:22, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"is a song recorded by Nigerian recording artist Iyanya" - I think this could be overlinking it in the lead, but feel free to ignore
"and a nightclub in London, England" - remove "England" as major cities usually don't need an explanation to where they are
" a version of the song featuring non-explicit lyrics was released a few months later on 6 March" - in 2013
"The accompanying music video for the single was shot in London, England" - again remove England here (I think Vancouver, Canada should be left though!)
"Don Boye from tooXclusive enjoyed the music video and claimed that Iyanya "is ending 2013 on a high note"" - this should be in the reception section?
No dead links
No dab links

Once they're all clarified I'll take another look at this. JAGUAR 15:02, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Jaguar: Thanks so much! I have responded to everything. Carbrera (talk) 17:39, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for addressing all of the issues! This looks like it's ready to go now.

JAGUAR 18:41, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]