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Updated references,got rid of broken links. Need to streamline references, so that the same reference corresponds to the proper # in reference section. Some references are used more than once, how can I get the footnote to indicate that it's the same link instead of making another footnote? (Chelseablogger (talk) 22:14, 18 August 2014 (UTC))[reply]
Fixed more references, streamlined them. Entered links to various info. Please check to make everything is correct. If not, what can I do to make the page better so it's published? (Chelseablogger (talk) 18:31, 19 August 2014 (UTC))[reply]
My advice would be to drastically shorten or remove the "Awards", "Collections" and "Exhibitions" sections. Write running text instead of lists of bullet points, and focus on those events that were the subject of third-party coverage - the others likely aren't all that important anyway. The next step would be to submit the draft for another review via the "Resubmit" button in the "Submission declined" message box. Huon (talk) 18:55, 19 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
This Frank Holder page is about the sculptor, not the jazz musician. (Chelseablogger (talk) 15:45, 20 August 2014 (UTC))[reply]
Is there any way to change the title of this page to just "Frank Holder", for clarification, the other Frank Holder is a musician (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Frank_Holder), as this one is an artist who also does a lot of other things.
Given that the musician's successful career spanned decades before this Frank Holder was even born, I do not think the subject of this article can be claimed to be the primary topic for the title "Frank Holder". People looking for that title will more likely be interested in the jazz musician than in the sculptor and choreographer. We could choose a different disambiguating term if you think "artist" isn't the best choice, but omitting it entirely is not a good idea. Huon (talk) 21:34, 29 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the response. In this case, can it be Frank Holder (influencer)? Or Frank Holder (artist and consultant)? thanks. ~~Chelseablogger~~
Given that the article doesn't mention Holder influencing anybody but himself nor Holder being a consultant, neither of those terms strikes me as a particularly helpful disambiguation. I can't even tell what "influencer" is supposed to mean. Someone who doesn't do anything himself but inspires others? Is that what Holder is primarily known for? I don't think so. Huon (talk) 22:13, 29 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
