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April 5, 2013	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 22:08, 1 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Info box

It says promotional single but nowhere else in the article? Was it actually released as one or confirmed somewhere? Alexandra Burke confirmed in an interview that "The Silence" was a promotional single, and even then I had a hard time proving that I was right to the reviewer.
- It was a free release so yes Till 03:43, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  - Can you source "The decision was clarified in a statement posted on the Sugababes' official Facebook page: "As a thank you to their fans, the Sugababes are offering their new single, 'Freedom' as a free download via Amazon."" then? — AARON • ^TALK 11:33, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    - Done Till 12:34, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Probably best to say upcoming eighth studio album, as it hasn't been released yet. How it's written implies that the album has been released.
- Hmm they are kind of inactive, perhaps 'anticipated'? Till 03:43, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Release and reception

"In July 2011, the Sugababes released a teaser of the song online.[11] The full version of "Freedom" premiered online in August 2011.[10]" could be one sentence, it's a bit jolted at the moment.
- Done Till 03:43, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
This could all be one paragraph really.
- Didn't make it 1 paragraph but fixed I think. Till 03:43, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

I'd merge this with the Live performances section and rename it as Promotion, like "I See You (Theme from Avatar)", as they are both very short sections which are for the same thing, promo.
- Done Till 03:43, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Status

A generally well written and formatted article, as always. On hold. — AARON • ^TALK 14:20, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks :) Till 03:43, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  - GA. — AARON • ^TALK 12:41, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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