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This article currently has a sentence that reads: "His The French Revolution: 1788–1792 is an outstanding explanation of the social, political and philosophical currents (and monarchical incompetence) that led to that cataclysm." My objections here are to "outstanding", which strikes a promotional tone, and "cataclysm", which is a highly subjective way of looking at the French Revolution. Any suggestions for how to reword this sentence? Or different takes on it? Tigercompanion25 (talk) 17:22, 19 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
