Talk:Gang Bang (song)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:42, 2 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Add "recorded" in between "song" and "by"
Shouldn't it be "singer and songwriter"?
I don't think you have to include "Although not released as a single"
American English: "criticised" → "criticized"
"While working on her then-upcoming album" → You should probably include the name of the album since it isn't mentioned at all except in the lead
I don't think "hits" is really encyclopedic
"Among the songs recorded for the album, "Gang Bang" was confirmed to be part of the track listing." → When was it confirmed? And source?
Since Tarantino has done a good handful of films (with almost all of them being blockbuster films), you probably can remove Pulp Fiction altogether; this would sound better in a magazine
"Shot you dead, shot my lover in the head... I'm going straight to hell... I've got a lot of friends there," --> Should the "..." be "/" instead?
"MTV News's" --> "MTV News'"
"X. Alender" → Says differently in the source
"The song received positive critical feedback." --> This sounds redundant to me :/
Already linked The Guardian
"Although it was not released as a single, " --> Same as before
I don't think you need to link "setlist"
"Good Morning America" should be italicized
"Dexter" should be italicized

Great job as always. On hold to address these few and minor issues. Carbrera (talk) 03:31, 7 September 2016 (UTC).[reply]