Talk:Gary Estrada

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This is terribly written. Here's an example:

He regularly plays for basketball and other events in the annual Star Olympics,

Regularly plays for basketball?

Another one is in Private Life section.

== Estrada is a freelance actor, athlete, farmer, and board member. He is married with kids to Bernadette Allyson, a former actress and television host. He had a son with Chesca Diaz, Kiko Estrada, who went to Star Magic to have his workshop; he moved to GMA and appears in Tween Hearts. ==

Estrada being a freelance actor is not private. That is and what he is mostly known for.

It also mentions his son Kiko Estrada. It starts of with having a son with Cheska Diaz, then states that he went to Star Magic and them moved to GMA. Are they talking about Gary or Kiko? If it's the son, there too many details making the whole sentence confusing.

This is better

Personal

He is married with kids to former actress and telivision host, Bernadette Alyson. [Mention his kids with Bernadette here. Add names and if available, birthdates.]. He also has a son, Kiko Estrada[I would link this to Kiko Estrada's wiki page], with former actress Cheska Diaz.