Talk:Get Sexy/GA1

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Reviewer: 1111tomica (talk · contribs) I will review the article:) 20:17, 17 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No dead links or disambiguation pages. That's good ! — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22
10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
Lead
  • "Get Sexy" is a song by English girl group Sugababes, taken from the group's seventh studio album, ---> "Get Sexy" is a song by English girl group Sugababes, taken from their seventh studio album... (because there is repeating of the word group in the sentence)— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • It was written by Phillip Lawrence, Ari Levine, Bruno Mars, Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass and Rob ManzoliIt and produced by The Smeezingtons. ---> It was written by Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass, Rob Manzolilt, Phillip Lawrence, Ari Levine, Bruno Mars and produced by the latter three under their stage name The Smeezingtons.— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Not done. Britain uses dd/mm/yy format. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Emil Nava and features the group's members in a house of mirrors, a bird cage and on a couch ... on a couch? I mean I don't find it necessary here. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Background and composition (merge the both sections since the composition one is too small to standing like that)
  •  Not done.
  • I have expanded the composition section, hopefully it is long enough now. Till I Go Home (talk) 01:04, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Get Sexy", which was selected as the album's lead single, was written by The Smeezingtons, Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass and Rob Manzoli.[3] It was produced by The Smeezingtons ... use the sentence from the lead.— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Not done. Britain uses dd//mm//yy. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:23, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Not done. Britain uses dd//mm//yy. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:23, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Composition
Critical reception
Commercial performance
  • Looks good
Music video
References

Mmm they are pretty bad condition. Here are the tasks: — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • 1. publisher=Hachette Filipacchi Médias
  • 2. The same as 1
  • 4. Same as 1 and 2
  • 5. Same as 1, 2 and 4
  • 6. Same us 1, 2, 4 and 5
  • 7 Un-italicize iTunes. publisher= Apple
  • 8 Un-italicize Discogs
  • 9. work=Daily Mail|publisher=Associated Newspapers Ltd
  • 10. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5 and 6
  • 11. You have the task in the composition review
  • 12. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5, 6 and 10
  • 13. work=Guardian|publisher=Guardian Media Group
  • 14. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 10 and 12
  • 15. Un-italicize Popjustice
  • 18. Same as the previous
  • 19. publisher=UK Singles Chart. The Official Charts Company
  • 20. Same as 19
  • 21. Same as 19 and 20
  • 22. publisher= MTV UK. Viacom
  • 28. Same as 9
  • 29. Same as before
  • 30. Link Capital FM
  • 31. Un-italicize Sugababes.de
  • 33. Needs accessdate
  • 34-43. All need accessdate
Will post more comments tomorrow. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 00:31, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
All in all
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
  • I addressed all the issues above except the music video screenshot, where I changed the caption. Is it relevant now? Till I Go Home (talk) 01:38, 23 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Why is Digital Spy in the name of the reference. Both Digital Spy and Hachette Filipachi Media should be in the publisher. For the image is good now. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 08:54, 23 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Because that's the title of the page. Till I Go Home 08:56, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
    Nevermind. You remove it from there and adding it in the publisher. After you finish formatting the references well. I will pass the article. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 08:57, 23 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    So will it be "|publisher=Digital Spy. Hachette Filipachi Media" ? Till I Go Home (talk) 08:59, 23 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes.:) The same with the others. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 09:01, 23 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    I put in Digital spy in the publisher now. :) Till I Go Home (talk) 09:05, 23 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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