Talk:Grammy Award for Best Performance Music Video/GA1

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Reviewer: Blackjacks101 (talk) 18:22, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this article soon =D--Blackjacks101 (talk) 18:22, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Great! Thank you for your assistance. FYI: Grammy Award for Video of the Year was just promoted, and I have also listed Grammy Award for Best Concept Music Video at GAN. You can view details about my Grammy Award "project" by visiting the Projects tab on my profile. Looking forward to your review! --Another Believer _(Talk) 18:41, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Yah I did, your doing awesome! BTW your links are all good same with your media. =D--Blackjacks101 (talk) 18:45, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

There really wasn't that many issues since you did what Legolas recommended on this one.

Background of The Monkees Michael Nesmith --< of The Monkees, Michael Nesmith,

Done. --Another Believer _(Talk) 19:51, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Recipients The Prince's Trust All-Star Rock Concert --< Is this miss linked? If the page doesn’t exist please remove link

Done. --Another Believer _(Talk) 19:51, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

world tour --< add the tour name

The source does not include the tour name. I did not want to include details not cited in the reference. --Another Believer _(Talk) 19:51, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Directed by Bud Schaetzle, --< don’t start this sentence again this way, (the previous sentence start’s just like it)

Done. --Another Believer _(Talk) 19:51, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

singer-songwriters --< not plural

Done. --Another Believer _(Talk) 19:51, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

and Stevie Nicks --< remove the and, put comma

Done. --Another Believer _(Talk) 19:51, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

After this I`ll easily pass.--Blackjacks101 (talk) 19:42, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for taking time to review the article! --Another Believer _(Talk) 19:55, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Awesome job..passing!--Blackjacks101 (talk) 20:20, 28 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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