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Maybe add "and performed by Argo." at the end of the first sentence instead, making the second only a mention of the selection for the 2016 contest in Stockholm?
"on 9 February 2016, while their song" → "in February 2016, a month before their song" removing the 10 March part from the end of the sentence
"a music video for the song" → "a music video for "Utopian Land"" with the wikilink
"the Greek broadcaster Hellenic Broadcasting Corporation (ERT) announced that they would be selecting their act" → "ERT announced that they would be selecting Greece's act"
"of the announcement, including Christina Lachana," → "of the announcement: Christina Lachana," since all of them are listed here
"The song was presented via" → "It was presented via"
Removed ERT World, but ERA 2 is mentioned in the sentence by its full name Δεύτερο Πρόγραμμα της Ελληνικής Ραδιοφωνίας (second program). Grk1011 (talk) 18:38, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; my main problem is the original research level. --K. Peake 08:54, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Kyle Peake: Thank you for another in depth review! I have made all of the changes you've requested, with a couple comments above. Please let me know if you catch anything else. Grk1011 (talk) 14:08, 7 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Grk1011 You still haven't removed the overlink of European Broadcasting Union that I mentioned twice. --K. Peake 07:09, 8 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake That's not a GA requirement or a requirement at all per WP:OVERLINK: Citations stand alone in their usage, so there is no problem with repeating the same link in many citations within an article; e.g. |work=The Guardian.Grk1011 (talk) 13:11, 8 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Grk1011 Why are you inconsistent with wikilinking them in this article if this is the case? Also, ref 3 needs a publisher. --K. Peake 09:16, 9 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake Should be all set now. Mistakes can happen when you're requested to fix things that aren't wrong; they don't stand out like actual errors. Thanks again for such a detailed review! Grk1011 (talk) 12:49, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Grk1011 It seems strange that this is a persisting issue, but sources like European Broadcasting Union and WiwiBloggs aren't consistently wikilinked; the overlinking does not matter, rather that it seems to be done randomly... --K. Peake 21:32, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake No, I typically link all of them consistently. Grk1011 (talk) 23:13, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Grk1011 This is not fully consistent though, like refs 25, 29, 30 and 36 not wikilinking the EBU article for instance. --K. Peake 07:34, 12 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake Did a final read through. Looks consistent now. Let me know if anything remains. Thanks. Grk1011 (talk) 13:43, 12 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
✓Pass now, don't see any remaining issues! --K. Peake 09:32, 13 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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Done, but with some rewording so please feel free to recheck this section. Grk1011 (talk) 14:08, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; my main problem is the original research level. --K. Peake 08:54, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
