Talk:Guy Berryman/Archive 1

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I've edited this article since it was short of information, and i've also taken out the stub banner.--Victoria Eleanor 15:47, 25 February 2006 (UTC)

Trivia

"He has knowledge of how sound and music is recorded." - wow! Removed this rather boring piece of trivia. --duncan 10:39, 9 April 2006 (UTC)

No picture?

Not even a thumbnail? What amazes me is there are all these specifics down to the cigarettes he smokes, and the amplifiers he uses... But theres not even a little picture? --TheGamerDude 03:49, 23 January 2007 (UTC)

He is engaged to dutch model Keshia Gerrits, 14 years younger than him. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mirkwood71 (talk • contribs) 05:08, 4 September 2012 (UTC)

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GA Review

Passed. Kj cheetham (talk) 19:20, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Kj cheetham (talk · contribs) 10:06, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

Starting review. -Kj cheetham (talk) 10:06, 28 August 2023 (UTC)


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
    No copyvio issues, Earwig only flags up quotes.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
    Seems stable.
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    Images ok, with captions and seemingly proper licenses.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:


Initial grammar suggestions, not including Oxford commas suggestions:

"In 2020, he launched fashion label Applied Art Forms, being inspired by" to "In 2020, he launched the fashion label Applied Art Forms, inspired by"
"born on 12 April 1978 in Kirkcaldy, Fife, Scotland, being the" to "born on 12 April 1978 in Kirkcaldy, Fife, Scotland. He was the"
"He grew a passion" to "He developed a passion"
"dropped out his original degree" to "dropped out of his original degree"
"they said while Buckland is usually more optimistic" to "they said that while Buckland is usually more optimistic"
"Berryman tends is more critical" to "Berryman tends to be more critical"
"appeared at CTM Festival" to "appeared at the CTM Festival"
"bassist also added his focus" to "bassist also added that his focus"
"Applied Art Forms does occasional updates" to "Applied Art Forms makes occasional updates"
"Blood Red Rose's debut album Pray to Be Free" to "Blood Red Rose's debut album, Pray to Be Free"
"After six years of relationship" to "After six years of dating" (or similar?)

I'll do a read through and check sourcing soon. -Kj cheetham (talk) 17:49, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

All fixed! GustavoCza (talk • contribs) 21:38, 29 August 2023 (UTC)


GustavoCza, I read through all the sections, and nothing to add really, it seems well written! Nothing I spotted that should have had a reference but didn't. Not refs in the Discography section, but not sure if any are needed?

Sources spot-checking a random-ish selection:

[5] ok
[7] ok
[8] ok
[11] ok
[19] ok
[21] ok
[24] amazon link - is there a better ref for this?
[27] ok
[29] ok
[31] ok
[34] ok
[40] ok
[44] ok
[48] the source is from 2003, so sure his equipment still includes those items? Maybe better to say "In 2003, this equipment included..." or similar?
[54] ok
[55] source is from 2021, so not sure should say "currently". Also see MOS:CURRENTLY.
[56] ok

This is very close to passing, but I'll leave it on hold for a bit for you to respond to the above. -Kj cheetham (talk) 19:02, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

[24] This website from 2012 says the album was released in the previous month, it should do the trick.
[48] Solved.
[55] Solved. But just out of curitosity, he still lives there and it's a very pretty house! GustavoCza (talk • contribs) 19:12, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
All looks good to me now, so this is a pass. That's definitely a house I could only dream of! -Kj cheetham (talk) 19:19, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Comment

I'm not so sure an equipment list is appropriate for Wikipedia. But that's just me.

Just you!  :)

Besides, its more relevant than seeing a celeb's favorite colour or beer of choice. --Madchester 04:01, 2005 Mar 13 (UTC)

Equipment list should DEFINITELY come back ASAP. RonDivine (talk) 02:01, 23 September 2008 (UTC)

Hi how are you doing 2A02:C7C:4464:6900:247A:DE42:1272:5429 (talk) 09:51, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
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