Talk:Haniwa Terracotta Dancers

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Feedback from New Page Review process[edit]

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for creating the article on an interesting subject. I've left two tags for improvements that can be made..

Netherzone (talk) 01:23, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, @Netherzone. Some edits to the article were made to fix the personal reflection flag -- is this regarding the quotes or another part of the article? Heidtke (talk) 17:48, 4 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Improved copy / personal reflection[edit]

I edited some of the text to improve the flow of the article. The quotes from the Japanese historians I left, but they still feel a bit lumpy.

I don't know if the article really needs the {{personal reflection}} tag. The descriptions are precise for an article on a work of art, and are mostly cited. Xcia0069 (talk) 19:22, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, @Xcia0069. I made some minor changes to the quote translations and introductions. I'm still unable to find a citation for the first critique, but that seems to be the only place left flagging the article as personal reflection. Heidtke (talk) 17:50, 4 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Xcia0069 Disregard last message, there are now citations added for all quotes. Heidtke (talk) 17:54, 4 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]