Talk:Heal Los Angeles Foundation

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Orphan article[edit]

So that this is not an orphan article can other articles be edited to mention this foundation some how? TruthGuardians (talk) 00:11, 2 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Im working on it MraClean (talk) 02:37, 2 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Nearing namespace ready[edit]

This article is nearing publishing stage. @Storchy, I find your edits helpful and your experience useful. Might you have any suggestions prior to move? TruthGuardians (talk) 16:25, 2 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for asking, TruthGuardians. It's looking pretty good so far, but it makes a little too much use of press releases. I've done a little bit of cleanup, but I'm not 100% sure it meets WP:Notability (organizations and companies) yet.

So I've added an Article for Creation template to the top, and I recommend that you submit it through the draft review process when you think it's ready. You certainly don't have to, but it's more likely not to get sent for deletion by another editor later, if you get it reviewed for notability first. Thanks for starting the article. Storchy (talk) 17:54, 2 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Well it's not clear why you asked for my opinion on this, since you simply went ahead and moved it to main space without any changes. I've done some more cleanup on the promotional tone. @TruthGuardians and MraClean:, do you have any professional connection to this organisation or to the Jackson family? Storchy (talk) 05:14, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the clean up. When you stated above that everything looked okay so far, I didn’t see anything wrong either. I speak for myself here as I don’t personally know MraClean beyond Wikipedia when I say I don’t have any business or professional connections to the Jackson family. I am a fan and subject matter expert of the family and their incredible accomplishments. MraClean asked for my assistance on this article, after realizing that there were enough sources to build this article, I agreed to do so. TruthGuardians (talk) 05:26, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

No, I have no professional connection to this organisation or Jackson family. I like the Jacksons tho. Im a fan. Its halloween, so that made me think of Thriller Night event the foundation have. So thats why I wanted Heal LA to have own page. There are enough sources for it clearly. I appreciate all the help I can get, cause im still new at this. So thank you both TruthGuardians and Storchy. MraClean (talk) 05:35, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Storchy, what do you think about adding the mission section back, but instead of calling it mission, rename the section “purpose?”TruthGuardians (talk) 05:46, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

That still sounds like a mission statement. What did you want to put in a separate section that can't be added to the lead section? Storchy (talk) 05:47, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Truthfully? It’s more aesthetics for me. The section was rather short and probably didn’t constitute its own section anyway, but the article looked way better on a mobile device with the section, but on a computer, not so much. So give a little take a little. I guess I can live without it for sake of wiki policies and MOS guidelines. Maybe in the future another section could get added about another topic. TruthGuardians (talk) 05:55, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Storchy is right when I think about it. I read the lead again and the mission is clearly stated there. After a while, when the article has aged , it will grow. More content is coming soon and you will get that additional section. MraClean (talk) 06:07, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]