Talk:Heroism in The Lord of the Rings/GA1
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Reviewer: REDMAN 2019 (talk · contribs) 14:07, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
I will take this one. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 14:07, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
Link Bilbo and unlink in the Receiving the magic sword section.
- Done.
Analysis[edit]
- Maybe expand on what Frodo's "defeat and disillusionment" was. Even if it's just telling us what caused it (The loss of the ring and his wound from the Nazgúl for instance).
- Good idea, added a gloss.
- Fairy tale and Old English are both repeat-linked here.
- Removed.
Comments[edit]
Not much to do here. Putting on hold for a week to compensate for the large number of GAN's you currently have going on. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 14:50, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
- Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:28, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
- Great! Passing. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 10:37, 18 November 2021 (UTC)
- Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:28, 17 November 2021 (UTC)