Talk:History of surveillance

Work in Progress[edit]

I am currently working on adding the information under each topic proposed for the page. This article is in it's very initial stages and any feedback or contributions are greatly welcomed! Amfun (talk) 23:41, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Your topic headings look good, and the lead was interesting, good luck with this article.Meatsgains (talk) 23:43, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

One suggestion. Section titles should not have every word capitalized. I think it's ok if the word is a proper noun though. See this for help: Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Capital letters. DaffyBridge (talk) 23:52, 24 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for both of these comments and suggestions, definitely helpful! Amfun (talk) 03:29, 25 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Class additions left a mess[edit]

This article was the subject of a class exercise on 09/01/15, and it has been left in a horrendous state. If there are any editors out there willing to assist, I would love the help. For me, I have been known to take a hatchet rather than a scalpel to such jobs - so any and all contributions will be valued. Thanks! Scr★pIron^IV 14:07, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not opposed to the idea of restoring the article to its state prior to the class assignment. I'm not at all convinced that any of the additional material has helped at all. A great deal of it is unreferenced (despite attempts to imply references using unformatted bracket syntax (e.g. this is a fact.[32]) but with numbers that don't correspond to anything) and much of it is essay-like and non-neutral. Before taking the hatchet, I'm going to see if I can get the class instructor engaged in the conversation. WikiDan61^ChatMe!_ReadMe!! 14:30, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Support This should be reverted back, it was quite unorganized at first, and overwhelming to reviewers (even though I'm not one). —Skyllfully ^(talk | _contribs) 02:24, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment[edit]

This article is the subject of an educational assignment at University of Toronto supported by WikiProject Wikipedia and the Wikipedia Ambassador Program during the 2011 Q3 term. Further details are available on the course page.

The above message was substituted from {{WAP assignment}} by PrimeBOT (talk) on 16:44, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]