Talk:Hussein Saeed/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:25, 24 November 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR  18:25, 24 November 2016 (UTC)

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Checking against the GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   The first paragraph of the early life section needs a citation

   "Since then, Iraq was not able to qualify to the World Cup" - this too needs a source

   " Saeed played all the 630 minutes of Iraq's 7 matches" - missing full stop

   " One of the documents even showed him and Al-Badri executing a mission" - remove 'even', sounds informal

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   No original research found.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Just a few minor issues to address, but other than this the article is looking great. On hold JAGUAR  18:30, 24 November 2016 (UTC)

The issues pointed out in the (It is reasonably written well) section are now solved. Hashima20 (talk) 19:28, 24 November 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, this looks ready to be promoted now. JAGUAR  19:32, 24 November 2016 (UTC)

Really appreciate it! Hashima20 (talk) 19:34, 24 November 2016 (UTC)