Talk:J-Air/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Comments:

  1. "The airline has a fleet 12 aircraft, consists of Bombardier CRJ-200s and Embraer 170s.", "consists" should be "consisting".
    Corrected as suggested. Aviator006 (talk) 02:58, 24 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  2. Comma not needed in sentence "Fifty-seats Bombardier CRJ-200s were introduced and progressively replaced the five JS31s, until completion in August 2003."
    Comma removed as suggested. Aviator006 (talk) 02:58, 24 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 16:57, 23 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Dough4892, thank you once again for reviewing them for me. Greatly appreciately it. All comments reviewed and updated in the article. Aviator006 (talk) 02:58, 24 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 21:47, 24 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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