Talk:James Mursell

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This page might benefit from a number of small improvements.

It is not always clear when the page is trying to be purely biographical and when it is trying to put across the ideas contained in the academic works of James Mursell.

In several places it 'editorialises' the work of James Mursell, but it is not clear whether the interpretation given is personal to the author of the page, or more widely accepted. This is currently a problem for the page.

You might want to think about re-stucturing the page so that it is clear which sections are supposed to deal with biographical fact and which with the author's work. Astral highway (talk) 21:00, 30 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]