Talk:Jason Robertson (ice hockey)/GA1
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 04:03, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
- You said
He played for a number of minor ice hockey teams in Michigan
but then list a GTHL team.- I think you meant to list Little Caesars and the Detroit Kings AAA team (per body)
- Whoops, reworded.
- I think you meant to list Little Caesars and the Detroit Kings AAA team (per body)
Playing career[edit]
- WL Paul McFarland
Done
- Could you WL hat-trick to Hat-trick#Hockey?
- Done
- If you are interested, Linus Nyman (third paragraph) qualifies for a Wiki article
- Left an intentional redlink to remind me
- Maybe mention that he participated in the 2016 CCM/USA Hockey All-American Prospects Game
- Here's a reference
Added
- What was his draft rankings leading up to the NHL Draft? What did the NHL Central Scouting Bureau rank him?
- He was also drafted by the Omaha Lancers in the USHL Futures Draft
- [1]
- Added
- Please change Gabe to Gabriel Vilardi to bypass the redirect.
- Done
- WL OHL All-Star Third Team to 2017–18 OHL season#Third team
- Done
HickoryOughtShirt?4 Addressed all comments to this point! — GhostRiver 18:43, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
Continued review[edit]
- Pls WL OHL Third All-Star Team and OHL First All-Star Team in the Awards and Honours section
- Also, it should be Awards and Honors (not u) because he is American
- Pls WL NHL Rookie of the Month to List of 2020–21 NHL Three Star Awards#Rookie of the Month
- GhostRiver, Everything else looks good and I am working on getting a photo for you as well! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:49, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
HickoryOughtShirt?4 Done all! Thank you for the review and for working on getting a photo – my media/press pass for the Farg only applies to concerts and I've been trying to get it expanded. Hoping the ballpark will give me one soon. — GhostRiver 21:25, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
- GhostRiver, It's cool that you have a pass at all! I will pass this article but I am still trying to get a photo. The Stars discord seems kinda dead and Twitter/Flickr is not revealing much. You'd think someone as successful as he has been would have a plethora of free photos to choose from fans etc.. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:36, 6 April 2022 (UTC)