Talk:Jim Eisenhower

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Prod concern[edit]

I have removed the PROD notice, because I believe that this article passes WP:Notability because of his various roles within several branches of government.--Blargh29 (talk) 22:51, 25 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

This article is greatly improved and I don't see any reason for a PROD tag anymore. The main difference here is that it's about public service and not for-profit lobbying groups. I might also suggest the change of a few words in the person life section be changed; the reference says he "drafted" and not "wrote" that PEO and it was the "foundation for" and not "used in" post-9/11 matters. It's good to slightly mix up what would otherwise be just a dull quote, but those two things in particular are major claims to significance and are possibly of historical note. Datheisen (talk) 02:52, 26 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]