Talk:John Hastings, 2nd Earl of Pembroke/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 16:27, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:27, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (14.5% is highest, due to incidental mirroring of a few phrases.) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y
• Images appropriately licensed Y
• Passing now, will add prose suggestions at a later date. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:54, 28 February 2018 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions

• apparently under the nose of a local French commander suggest apparently escaping the notice of a local French commander
• as Jonathon Sumption put it, Pembroke "may have had the grander name but his inexperience showed suggest linking Jonathan Sumption.
• @Serial Number 54129: That is all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 13:51, 5 March 2018 (UTC)
• Many Thanks again, Iazyges, good advice as ever, and all taken. Take care! ...SerialNumber54129^{...speculates} 14:22, 5 March 2018 (UTC)