Talk:John Houlton/GA1
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Reviewer: Kges1901 (talk · contribs) 18:16, 3 July 2022 (UTC)
I will review this one this week. Kges1901 (talk) 18:16, 3 July 2022 (UTC)
- proceeding onto England --> proceeding on to England
- He travelled to the Mediterranean --> He was deployed to the Mediterranean or maybe 'was sent' since traveling has civilian implications
- Mention that HMS Furious' reinforcement of Malta was during Operation Pedestal
- diverting Luftwaffe resources --> to distract the Luftwaffe
- Link No. 12 Group RAF
- ; the two Ju 52 transport aircraft that he claimed as damaged on 28 November 1943 are believed to have crashed into the sea does Shores state if German records confirm this?
- When did Houlton retire from the RNZAF and what rank did he reach Kges1901 (talk) 13:58, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
Kges1901, thanks for the review, much appreciated. I have responded above and with edits to the article. The edits are here. Thanks again. Zawed (talk) 10:39, 7 July 2022 (UTC)