Talk:Kingsgrove North High School

Nice work, but improvements needed

Hi, nice work creating this article! There are however a number or further improvements that could and should be made to it:

1. Format-- According to WP:MOS bullet points are to be avoided and should be made into standard text in most cases
2. Lead paragraph---Per WP:LEAD the opening paragraphs should summarize the entire article in a brief form and avoid details. Its also not a place to list all the awards of the school as that looks like the article is pushing a point of view (ie this school is the greatest) see also WP:PEACOCK.
3. Sources-- Per WP:RS articles on based on secondary reliable sources such as news papers, magazines and books. We want to avoid a situation where the school is used as a source to report on itself. A little bit of that is OK but it should be supplementary to a significant number of outside secondary sources like news reports or industry magazines etc. For example the web pages of the organizations that honored or awarded the school would be appropriate sources for awards rather than the schools own publications.
4. Bare URLs are not acceptable as citations. See WP:CITE for more information on how to create a proper citation

You are off to a great start and have done a great job considering that you are new to Wikipedia. So keep up the good work and let me know if you have questions or need help. Cheers!-- — Keithbob • Talk • 18:04, 17 February 2013 (UTC)

Reassess

If you want to go for GA status then you need to have a chat on the schools talk page to find someone who can hold your hand thro the process (not me). All the best Victuallers (talk) 13:41, 10 August 2013 (UTC)

External links modified

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified one external link on Kingsgrove North High School. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

• Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20120712071430/https://www.paralympic.org.au/team/mitchell-kilduff to http://www.paralympic.org.au/team/mitchell-kilduff

When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 18 January 2022).

• If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
• If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 23:14, 10 December 2017 (UTC)