Talk:Kurtis Gabriel

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 05:07, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:07, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Caption for the infobox image would be nice. Done
No info on his father's name?

Not that I can find

Might be worth mentioning that his parents separated when Gabriel was 6, from ref 4. Done

And probably better to link straight to the website instead of the tweet. Done

Link Minor ice hockey for midgets. Done
Link Newmarket Hurricanes and Georgina, Ontario. Done

Why would I link Georgina, Ontario?

That's where the camp is taking place I assume? Nova Crystallis (Talk) 17:08, 2 May 2020 (UTC) Done[reply]

"win in a shootout and later scoring the team's only goal in a 4–1 loss to the Plymouth Whalers." Maybe mention both losses were to the Whalers? Done
"During the 2017–18 season, Gabriel endured a partial cut to his median nerve and damage to a major muscle and a ligament in his wrist as the result of accidentally falling on a skate blade." Comma before as. Done
Ref 30 didn't say Gabriel was assigned to the AHL team.

In addition, the Devils placed forwards Blake Pietila, Kurtis Gabriel and Eric Tangradi, plus defensemen John Ramage and Brian Strait, on waivers. Waivers means they are being sent to the AHL but have the ability to be taken by any team.

"Gabriel concluded his only season with the New Jersey Devils recording four points in 22 games." Comma needed after Devils. Done
What's IOA?

¯\_(ツ)_/¯

It's the sponsor: "Insurance Office of America". Harrias ^talk 10:22, 2 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Harrias, added. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 10:28, 2 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Remove the slash from nhl.com for ref 17. Done
A good practice would be to link the first mention of publishers and/or authors in the references. Done

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:39, 2 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Nova Crystallis, thanks for the quick review. I believe I have fixed it all. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 08:07, 2 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]