Talk:Las Vegas Sands

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Initiative section[edit]

It seems to me that the Initiatives section is rather insignificant and does not cite any sources. recommending to delete this section unless someone can come up with better content for it — Preceding unsigned comment added by Crowpotken (talkcontribs) 18:35, 1 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Full article cleanup, copy editing, revision, modifying/eliminating citations, and more[edit]

I spent quite a bit of time with this article as it had many elements needing edits. I can't recall every last thing I edited, but I focused primarily on the advertising/PR tone and language, outdated links and references, redundant or unimportant facts that don't add to the quality or importance of the article (i.e., the tail numbers for the airplanes the company owns), and style issues. The language was frequently clunky and verbose. I eliminated approximately 2,000 words and a couple of tables. I am brand new to Wikipedia as an editor (not new as a Wikipedia user or as a copy editor) and this is my first edit. Even with my limited experience here, I cannot grasp why this article hasn't been thoroughly edited in 11 years. Jenbird831 (talk) 09:04, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]