Talk:Laurence Fox/Archive: GA review
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GAN on hold
- Is his exact date of birth known?
- Comment: I'm afraid I haven't been able to find a source for it. — JackLee 00:07, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- "probably best known" - eek...if there isn't a "best known" role, don't say anything here...just list all his major roles. Probably = Yucky.
- Fixed.
- Ref 1 (and others); IMDB isn't a reliable source
- Comment: Again, I haven't been able to find other sources. — JackLee 00:07, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- "(possibly Shakespeare's earliest tragedy)" - belongs in the TA article, not here
- OK, fixed. — JackLee 00:07, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- "When filming, Fox often play..." - is there more info on this? This paragraph could be expanded...
- Comment: No, I haven't found anything else. — JackLee 00:07, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
- Personal life section should probably go before filmography
- Comment: I feel that an actor's work is generally more important than his personal life and deserves to be placed first. — JackLee 00:07, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
Prose is generally quote good. Leave me a note when you're done with this stuff. Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 10:20, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for reviewing the article. I've taken into account some of your suggestions and added some comments above. — Cheers, JackLee –talk– 00:07, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
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Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 23:46, 23 April 2008 (UTC)