Talk:Liv Tyler/GA1

GA Review

Version reviewed

• "Royston Langdon (2003-2008)" – requires an en dash per WP:DASH
  • Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:37, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
• "trilogy (2001 - 2003), in" – en dash required here, and no spaces
  • Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:43, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
• I think the image should be cropped to only show her upper body – perhaps from right below her right elbow, so that doesn't get cut off. Otherwise, it's long, vertically.
  • I cropped the image, but I don't know what's wrong with it. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 22:01, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
• "After a brief hiatus" is a pretty short paragraph, but not much can be done there I suppose
• "Personal life" is made up of too many short paragraphs. I suggest merging a few, expanding a few, etc. until they aren't as small, stubby paragraphs. Please let me know when that is done then I can take another look at it.
  • Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:43, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
• Reference 2 needs to be formatted.
• "born Liv Rundgren[1] at Mount Sinai Hospital" – remove the bold
  • Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:31, 26 June 2008 (UTC)

Gary King (talk) 21:13, 26 June 2008 (UTC)