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A fact from Lucy Kaopaulu Peabody appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 14 February 2017 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the Kaʻahumanu Society, originally founded in 1864 by Hawaiian royalty Victoria Kamāmalu, Bernice Pauahi Bishop, and Liliuokalani, was rechartered by a lady-in-waiting in 1905?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2017/February. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Lucy Kaopaulu Peabody.

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Newspaper[edit]

https://books.google.com/books?id=CZROAAAAYAAJ&dq=lucy+peabody+letters+queen+emma&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=peabody

Lucy K. Peabody vs. Bishop Estates
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Miss Lucy K. Peabody watched the proccedings as representative of the Queen Emma branch of royalty
At Wilcox's Funeral
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Olga Kekauonohi Kali
Queen Emma Estate in 1906
Kaahumanu Society
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Young Chiefess Lying in State
Letters of Vanouver to Isaac Davis passed down to Lucy Peabody
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Peter Peabody Davis
- http://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn85047084/1905-10-23/ed-1/seq-7/
- http://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn82014689/1905-10-28/ed-1/seq-3/
- http://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn85047084/1905-10-20/ed-1/seq-1/
- http://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn83025121/1905-10-20/ed-1/seq-1/
- http://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn85047097/1905-10-20/ed-1/seq-3/
- http://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn82015415/1905-10-21/ed-1/seq-8/
- Had Famous Ancestor. HONOLULU, Oct. 20. Peter Peabody Davis died at Moanalua yesterday morning of cerebral hemorrhage in the forty-second year of his age. He was an uncle of Miss Lucy K. Peabody of Honolulu, of the line of ancient chiefs, a son of the late George Hueu Davis and a grandson of Isaac Davis, Kamebameha I's aide de camp in his conquest of these islands. The body has been embalmed and will lie in state at the Honolulu Undertaking Co.'s parlors, 1120 Fort street, to await the arrival of the dead man's aged mother, who is expected in the Kinau on Saturday.

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Lucy Kaopaulu Peabody/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:46, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:46, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria[edit]

GA Criteria

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No DAB links Y
No dead links N: http://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn85047084/1898-06-24/ed-1/seq-7/ and http://www.nhch.com/cms/View.aspx/Show/OurBenefactor-LucyKalanikumaikiekieHenriques are dead.

User:Iazyges. Fixed the link to https://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn85047084/1898-06-24/ed-1/seq-7/. It just missing an s. Had to toss the second because it is no longer retrievable one and added alternative sources instead.

No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions[edit]

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

she helped re-establish and became the second founder of the Kaʻahumanu Society, a female-led civic society chartered during the Hawaiian monarchy. suggest:
she founded the reestablished Kaʻahumanu Society, a female-led civic society chartered during the Hawaiian monarchy.
@KAVEBEAR: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 10:30, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Changed prose as suggested. KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:25, 23 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]