Talk:Malta at the 2018 Winter Olympics

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Malta at the 2018 Winter Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 01:42, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Reviewing later.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:42, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Ref 7 should be archived too, since the site is closing down.
  • Maybe add some of the results to the lead?
  • "Malta qualified one female athlete, Élise Pellegrin. Pellegrin was 26 years old at the time of the Peyongchang Games." Merge these two sentences.
  • "1 minute and 5 seconds" I think the numbers should be written out, but I'm not sure if MOS:NUMERAL applies here though.
  • "was better for her." Change to "was much better."
^Done. Courcelles (talk) 05:06, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Should be it for a short article.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:48, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • @Nova Crystallis:, short, but there's only so much one can say about a limited subject such as this! Thanks for the review, I've adressed everything you mentioned. Courcelles (talk) 05:06, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]