Talk:Manasser Biset/GA1
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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 01:10, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
I'll have a look at this. Gog the Mild (talk) 01:10, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
- Link Anglo-Norman, justice.
- Is Cany Cany-Barville?
- Pugh: for consistency, could "canons" have an upper case C?
- Is it worth linking "follower" to retinue? And "steward" to Steward (office)?
- "Biset's son was Henry Bisset" → 'They had a son, named Henry Bisset'.
- "Besides his son, Biset also had a daughter, Margaret." → 'Besides their son, Biset and Alice also had a daughter, Margaret.'
- Pugh & Crittall: they are given as editors. Is that of the article or the volume? In either case is hte actual author of the work known?
- the page for British History Online for the work doesn't list authors ... just editors. Ealdgyth (talk) 14:50, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
That's all I have. Gog the Mild (talk) 12:17, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
- Ha! It was very soothing. I often feel I have problems, but you seem to be making bricks without either mud or straw.
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